I loved your first verse. I really did. When I read the 'banana in my brain', it reminded me of me, I have tennis balls bouncing around in my brain.

I didn't understand 'liege dumbbell'. I think of
'knights in shining armor' when I read the word 'liege.'

"I know I have a pinhead" in the third verse made me pause. If you are stressing the banana, you may want to do a tiny change in the "I have" because it takes away from the 'I have a banana'. Maybe instead of 'I have' what if you used 'I seem a pinhead'?

but come share in the pain-not sure anyone would want to share in the pain, but what about learn about? Just a thought.

We have Aspergers in our family. I understand.
Thanks for sharing this with us. I did enjoy it.

Love,LinnAnn