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 Trump’s America – 2017  [13+]
A rhyming poem commenting upon Trump's America.
by Harry
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Very interesting but true poem! I believe what Trump is doing is unfair to America too.

The plot interested me very much so. The characters were believable. Yes, the dialog flowed naturally for me.

What I liked most about your poem is that it is so true about Trump. There's nothing I liked least about your poem. Everything you have said about Trump's actions and soon to be actions stands out for me.

There's nothing I would change within the writing of your poem because like you said you have the right to free speech!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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