What an inspiring poem. This is a very interesting poem and I love the way you rhymed your poem too. Your poem was surprisingly good and enjoyable too. Good luck in Mays Contest with "The Poet's Place".

Your poem made me feel happy because of it being Nature related. It invoked some happy and thrilling emotions.

your plot interests me. Your characters are believable. Your dialog flowed naturally for me in this poem.

Your time, place and other setting characteristics work together.

What I liked most was "in hues floating across the skies". there was nothing I liked least about your creative poem. Your whole entire poem stood out for me in a good way.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

Your writing of your poem is memorable.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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