What an inspiring poem and I love the way you rhymed this poem. I am a rhymer to when it comes to writing my poetry. I really like your poem you made me feel the same way about Music.

You plot has interested me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally.

Your time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most about your poem was the story you told. There is nothing I liked least.
Musical athletes,
harboring brawn and good taste
always float my boat. stood out for me in your poem.

No there is nothing I would change about the writing of your poem because it is perfect the way it is.

Your writing of your poem is memorable because the story of your poem is unique in its own way.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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