First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
I like this poem because of the words. I feel this poem is simple and positive. Your words are very true that Trust before Lust,Consistency before Efficiency, Dignity before Negativity. I love that combination. This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like this thoughtful poem. The voice of the poem is the strength for me. It is so pure.
I like the thought woven in this piece. Keep writing.
SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.
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You last responded to this review 11/02/2018 @ 8:56am EDT
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