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Hi!Melissa!!

It's been a pleasure to review your poem"Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.

A wonderful poem about moon. I like the way you painted it. The concept is unique. your poem built with true emotions. The tone is soothing and positive. I like how each line breaks.

The first stanza is my favorite
"The moon has a face like a clock on a wall.
It shines down on us when the sky is black
And leads us to our dreams."

I didn't any mistake. I enjoyed. It's well written. Keep writing!!

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