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 Nothing can be undone  [E]
You guys can check this song on my youtube October Maroon
by JS
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!JS

It's been a pleasure to review your lyrics "Nothing can be undone"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a beautiful lyrics. I especially like the words.

*BurstP* THE POEM: This lyrics has wonderful thoughts inside every line. It crafted with lovely romantic thought. I find this poem is simple, positive. The tone of this poem is filled with hope.

*BurstP* FAVORITE LINES: I’m not fool to trust but I forgive you
Our memories now just residue
Ignore me when we meet
Though it’s hard but I pretend

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I appreciate the way you write it. I enjoyed.

Keep Writing!!!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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