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Decaying Beauty  [E]
The beauty is in the dying. [Villonnet]
by Winnie Kay
Review of Decaying Beauty  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!Ms. Winnie

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Decaying Beauty"  from read and review page.

This is beautiful poem about decaying beauty. It's beautifully started with the line "Creation dawns from Death’s designing reign". It's full of wonderful thoughts. I liked the way you write this poem. I like the images you have painted here. It's so enchanted. I could feel the sounds, smells, touch, and feelings of this poem. The last stanza is my absolutely favorite

"Creation dawns from Death’s designing reign.
Grieve not the changing of the ebbing day,
for in decay is born a new domain."

I appreciate the way you wrote this poem using 15 lines Villonnet Form.

I enjoyed it reading.

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