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 Fountain of Youth  [18+]
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Review of Fountain of Youth  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi!Neva

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Fountain of Youth"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I especially like this poem. I love the symbolic words you have used here. your poem has good message. The last two stanza are my absolute favorite. I admire every word choice and the flow was smooth and continuous. You paints a nice picture about Fountain of youth. I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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