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This is really a great poem about racism with the great Kofi Annan’s quote "We may have different religions, different languages, different colored skin, but we all belong to one human race."

This is a beautiful thoughtful poem about racism. I appreciate every lines of your poem. Your words are very true and pure that all our skin is colored in different shades, by vitamin D. But sadly some people has disease like racism. They are suffering in superiority and inferiority complex . I like the way you put your feelings into words.

I like the lines “in the sand, not between
us, but around, a line
to encircle every human,
to help us belong as one”


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