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 Not Me  [E]
A girl with DID (Dis-associative Identity Disorder)
by B00kw0rm101
Review of Not Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Not Me for "Invalid Item.

First Impression: This free verse poem describes someone with Dis-associative Identity Disorder. The speaker's emotions is expressed through the descriptions of the personalities in the mirror.

What I like: I like the use of different line lengths because it shows the emotions through both the rhythm and the length of the lines. I also like the lack of punctuation because it helps express the speaker's emotions.

Suggestions: I encountered no distraction.

Final Thoughts: Thank you for sharing this educational poem. It gives the reader some idea of how the disorder disrupts an individual's life. Write on.

Prosperous Snow WDC Power Review



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