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Love is so Fine  [E]
Love is so fine But it hurts all the time.
by Sharmelle's Expressions
Review of Love is so Fine  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Love is so Fine"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to thank you for this sweet little poem. I am now reviewing it and this review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like this poem because your words are so true. Its express strong emotion. you wrote beautifully with deepest feelings. I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful. I appreciate its simplicity. My favorite lines
Love is something
But it’s not anything

*BurstP* suggestions: I think you can add some extra lines to make it more beautiful.

I enjoyed it reading.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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