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 Dear Me Letter Contest Entry  [E]
Letter written to me by me for the dear me letter writing contest.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Dear Me Letter Contest Entry on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army
I love reading dear me contest letters. Your letter is inspirational and after reading this I find encouragement too. I appreciate this and enjoy it.

I like the third paragraph Enjoy your writing with a cup of tea at your side waiting for you to take a sip and enjoy it bouquet of aroma.Here, in my country tea is very popular. I can't imagine starting my day without a cup of tea.

I found that you need a verb corrections The world will be a better place because you were here and did what you could to help people and make their lives better it should be “are”.
It would be interesting to read if you align your letter.

I think you are a good writer and you can make this world beautiful through reading and writing.

This was a very good letter! I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you write some more letters in the coming years. Thank you for sharing your work!

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