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Given: May 26, 2018 at 4:38pm
Length: 661 Characters |
655 w/o WritingML
This was a lovely poem. It is also a great reminder to seize the day. I love the first line- graceful wings. What a lovely mental picture you share.
Never but a flicker from the surface? I would really hope it's not buried to deep. It's a beautiful thought.
Sometimes there is no harmony, like the guy yelling across the library and almost fighting the security officer. But the past is not always gone. We can draw from it to bolster the serenity we seek. Just a thought.
Being a Christian, I can find serenity just about whenever I want. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It is a gentle reminder that we all can use these days.
love, LinnAnn
You responded to this review 05/31/2018 @ 8:38am EDT
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