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Given: May 26, 2018 at 4:49pm
Length: 649 Characters |
643 w/o WritingML
This was such a delightful little story in a poem. I've written two books about dragons and love to read about them from others. Thank you so much for sharing your talent here for us to read.
I giggled when I read the part of 'she's never stepped on me.' That was so cute.
I did have some concern about the rhythm and meter. Some of the sentences just didn't flow well. I even counted the syllables to make sure I wasn't messing up somehow. Maybe if you counted them you could see what I mean. The second line in some of them is what threw me off.
I like the part about the between place too. Again. Thanks so much.
love, LinnAnn
You responded to this review 05/31/2018 @ 12:59pm EDT
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