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The UPS Blues  [E]
A gentle chide at Country-Western songs. (Humor ... or not)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of The UPS Blues  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!HuntersMoon

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to tell you that I love rhyming poetry. I found you have many wonderful poems here. I am now reviewing this beautiful song lyrics. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good poem. I like the colors and shapes and sounds of this poem.

*BurstP* THE POEM: This poem has lovely romantic thoughts woven in each line. I admire every word choice and the flow was smooth and continuous. The tone I find this poem is soothing and positive. Your rhyming scheme make this poem more interesting.

*BurstP* FAVOURITE LINES: In time I will heal and I will be free.
I'll send back these heartaches to you C.O.D.
I'll send back these heartaches to you C.O.D.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I enjoyed it reading.

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