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Review by Mina~
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Hi!CJ

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* MY IMPRESSION: This is a good poem it packed with message. I like the words. The poem is very rhythmic. It gives me the positive impression that we all need to go on with life. I like the title as well. Your poem delivers a powerful message.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I enjoy this. Its so full of wonderful thoughts .

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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