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Hawaiian Breeze  [E]
Hawaiian Breeze is my favorite scent from Glade.
by Sharmelle's Expressions
Review of Hawaiian Breeze  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Hawaiian Breeze on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

This is sweet poem about Hawaiian Breeze. I appreciate the simplicity of this poem. You expressed beautifully your feelings . Sometimes we need to look around, slow down, take deep breath to avoid the digital world, and we found the simple pleasures that makes us delightful.

You have good rhyming in this poem. I like the lines

The aroma of this sent is so, so pleasant
That it brings a pleasant Pervade


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