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The Miracle of Love and Happiness  [E]
There is an afterglow shining around the world.
by Sharmelle's Expressions
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Miracle of Love and Happiness"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like this afterglow poem because it is rich in words. You are right that The changes in every person are so everlasting that there is an afterglow shining around the world.

We come to this world only for a few amount of time. Life begins like sunrise. Sometimes clouds and storm prevent us from shinning. But after storm keep sun shining. It’s so wonderful to see sun shines again. These was reflected in your poem. You paint's a nice picture. The tone I find this poem is positive and so true.

I like the lines of the end stanza
for us all to capture this without withholding the enrichment
of all this love in the world brings a strong lasting presence

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