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Review of Chasing Life...  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  from read and review page on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story about self-help. Wonderfully told. I appreciate it very much! Your words are so pure and true and inspirational. I understand you wrote it from personal experiences but it looks great.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I think you can use writing ML and bullet points to make it easy for a readers to locate the important information.

Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!!

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