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Review #4416363
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Little Poems - Haiku - Tanka - Etc  [E]
A place to share my little poems, haiku, tanka, than bauk, 24 Syllable, etc
by Tinker
         Review for entry/chapter: "After" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am reading this as part of the I Write in 2018 activity, Week 22. It is always a pleasure to read your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I took this to be waking up and experiencing the morning after vows were exchanges, in other words after a wedding. To me it is positive and forward looking, which is what should happen. That would be the case if everything went well with the big ceremony.

*Cool**Idea*

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I also felt a bit of melancholy, maybe I am reading something into this, but a bit of sentiment over letting go of a past way of life. There is that in the mix too, always. I liked the tiniest hint of something I read as regret. It makes it more balanced somehow. Well, there is always a down side where there is an up side to big events in life.

You packed a lot of eloquence into a short poem - well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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