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| (4.5)| Hello Angus, I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.   Why I chose this item: This is a part of the Angle Army July Challenge. I was to review something from your port and found this.  My favorites parts: The setting and the uniqueness of the story was wonderful. You have turned a simple into a place of nightmare.  Characters: There weren't many characters in this piece to focus into, except the narrator. He seemed to be a determined man and at the end dangerous. Well he had to defend himself.  StoryLine/Plot :The plot was different. It started with a simple problem with blue leaves and ended in an attacked of people changed to something else. The horror element slowly climbed its peak.  Action/Flow : The action grew as time passed and it reached it s peak at the end. There it stayed for we don't know what happened to Steve or to those that came climbing his walls.  Ending: The ending was full of horror and fear. And the question lingers on...  Overall impression: Overall it was a good read.. Just one suggestion. I felt for this story you could have written it in a log book style. Like Steve was keeping logs of events as and when they happened. [Just my thought]... Well deserved Awardicons...  A few Typos:my oldest daughter: my eldest daughter Keep on writing and scaring us...  ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 07/03/2018 @ 12:42pm EDT