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| (4.5)| Hello Angus, I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.   Why I chose this item: This is a part of July Challenge. I needed to review something from your port when this title caught my attention.  My favorites parts: I liked way you have slowly revealed about Darren' life, past and present, his wife and his intentions. You had one surprise in stored after every line in that paragraph.  Characters: The character of Darren was portrayed in one single paragraph and it was solid as a rock.  StoryLine/Plot :The story had certain character to it. The suspense grew slowly and though the ending was more or less inevitable, yet it had a charisma to keep the reader hooked to it.  Action/Flow : It was high on action right from the beginning. A man in a car that had the body of his wife in the trunk is always good at put that pulse racing.  Ending: As I said the end was expected but not the way it did.  Overall impression: Overall it was a well written piece with all the horror that you specialize in.   A few Typos:None that I noticed ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 07/06/2018 @ 12:22pm EDT