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 |  | Purple Christmas Magic  [E] Of course Santa is real!  |
| (4.0)| Hello Fyn, I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.   Why I chose this item: This is a part of Angel Army July Challenge and I needed to review something from your port. This was was pretty interesting.  My favorites parts: I liked the magic in your story. It had that spark that Christmas brings, especially when Cara found out about the confettis.  Characters: The mother: A calm woman with cool nerves who knows how to handle her kids. Cara: For a ten-year old, she had her own way of getting things done. Santa: Well... It was great of him to find Cara's mother and inform her about the girl's wish.  StoryLine/Plot :The plot was simple but had surprise not only for Cara but for us too. I read till the end to find out how it ended.  Action/Flow : The story flowed smoothly till the end. The scenes were easily distinguishable and well formed.  Ending: The end was full of smiles. It was wonderful and one could feel the magic you have woven in the story.  Overall impression: I loved reading your piece.  A few Typos:None that I noticed. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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