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 | Mele Kalikimaka-whaaa?  [18+] We got stranded on Maui for Christmas...all good, right?  |
| (4.0)| Hello Fyn, I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.   Why I chose this item: This is a part of Angel Army July Challenge and I was to review something from your port. I found this, though I couldn't pronounce the title I wanted to read it.  My favorites parts: I liked the end which came as a surprise. I also liked the concept that went behind the piece. You have shown that even traditional things can be enjoyed in a new way.  Characters: Both the husband and wife seemed to be pretty cool in tight situations.  StoryLine/Plot :The story line was simple with lot of fun and improvisations. It had a light mood to it.  Action/Flow : The flow was smooth except at the where I re-read. But it was a good surprise and a good dream too.  Ending: I loved the ending. A beautiful dream to start Christmas with.  Overall impression: Overall it was a fun reading.  A few Typos:None that I noticed... Nice piece... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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