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 | Christmas in July  [18+] For my C-I-J entries  |
| (4.0)| Hello Fyn, I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.   Why I chose this item: This is a part of Angel Army July Challenge. I had to review something from your port and found this. The title is interesting and attracted my attetenion.  My favorites parts: You have a lot of Santa stories in your port and each one of them are different. I liked how you have taken up a real situation and incorporated in in your story.  Characters: You have brought out the characters well. Well there is nothing to say about Mr. and Mrs. Claus. The name itself is suffice.  StoryLine/Plot :The plot was nice and refreshing. It gave me a vacationing feeling as if I went out with them.  Action/Flow : The story flowed smoothly taking the reader along with it in a ride.  Ending: The end was a happy one and what I liked best was your note   Overall impression: It was a lovely spirited story and i liked it very much.  A few Typos:There are a few punctuation missed. ”Besides,: "Besides, “Tis time: “'Tis time “Santa? Last year... : Who said this one? Clara or Fyndorian ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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