Hello Angus,

When I popped over to your profile this time I realized that I've already reviewed all of your featured items so I opened your 2018 stories folder. Your portfolio is very nicely arranged, by the way. It's also easy to navigate and colorful.

I'm not sure why this was categorized as an essay? It feels more like a story to me.

I questioned the sanity of the prince, expecting a 56 year old princes to "have many, many children and many, many grandchildren" ... unless this mystical land doesn't have menopause... or a very late one... not very likely.

Then I loved the part about her ripping the prince's note to shreds.

As usual with your great writing, you kept my attention right up to the end. But the end kind of confused me. Was the whole thing a dream (meaning, she wasn't even a prisoner or a princess)? Or just the part about the prince? I am not sure.

Your pacing was great. I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind.

Thank you for sharing your story!

Again, I'm super glad you're featured as a port raid recipient in the Angel Review Forum and look forward to reading more of your stories.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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