Greetings, Angus,

Wow, you did a fantastic job with the newsfeed prompt and I can totally see the connection to being stressed out and this story and its main character.

I must admit that I don't ever want anyone to "help" me like this being helped Virgil Thompson!

You crafted a true horror story that held my attention from beginning to end. This is another one that I think could win the "Twisted Tales" contest, should you want to enter again.

I did expect some kind of twist at the end, because I've already learned that you are quite adept at that writing technique but no way did I imagine the actual ending. Very creative and scary! You're brilliant and talented!

Your pacing was great.

I have no suggestions for improvement because the story is great as is.

Thank you for sharing your story!

Once again, I'm super glad you're featured as a port raid recipient in the Angel Review Forum. I suspect I'll be back the next time I want to be scared . I have to say... I'm reading a book of short scary stories and your stories are just as good as any I've read in this book so far. I seem to remember that you're already a published author but I think you could do your own book of short stories. You inspire me!

May your creativity continue to flow and inspire others!
PWheeler


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