I have seen many of these, but I have to admit I like this one the best so far. I noticed there were no words forming the melting wax down the sides. lol

There were a couple of spots that the flow was just a bit off.

What did you mean you'd make us yearn? Was that a romantic type of yearning? Were you hinting at candle lit dinners?

Found where there is mold? To what were you referring? Wine cellars of dirt?

There was a space between 'I recover fast' so I had to read it twice and then got it.

I loved how you rhymed mantle and candle. Good shot!

Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn