Hello,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: The Dance of Dis, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know them well.

Plot: The Dance of Dis, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions:


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle




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