Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: I like Dolphins, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your Dolphins well.

Plot: I Like Dolphins, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: I am not sure but maybe change the title to "I Like The Dolphins" (Sorry I have a program on my computer that wants to change your title to that so I'll leave the change up to you ok.)


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any other recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .