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 Alive Once More  [ASR]
Based on Matthew 27: 51-53 A dead man rises
by Whiskerfacebythefireplace
Review of Alive Once More  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Welcome to Lighthouse Poetry Contest


It is my pleasure to read and review your entry for The Lighthouse Poetry Contest. First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. I know that there are so many different contest here on WdC. I'm so pleased that you took the time to write and enter it. I hope that you enjoy my religious based contest and return often. It is nothing like sharing the joy, love, faith and the knowledge of our Heavenly Father.

Disclaimer:

These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and please disregard the rest for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "Alive Once More" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your piece has a nice rhythm and flow to it. Very easy to follow and see His point of view.

Imagery & Emotions:


Perfect view point from Jesus, I didn't expect anyone to write His. Sometimes I feel like people forget just how He felt about what He was going through. You shed light on how He possibly felt at that time. Excited about being reborn after such a horrible death. To be reborn to sit at His Father's side. The joy He must have felt. An amazing look into the possibility. Great job.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

To live again. A miracle from my Lord.

What a glorious feeling, no pain, no nothing and to be with your Father. You have written a beautiful piece and I found no errors or distraction's. You captured me from the very start and didn't disappoint any to the very end.

I want to thank you for entering and supporting "The Lighthouse Poetry Contest." I enjoyed reading and reviewing your entry. I hope that you enjoyed spending time, sharing and writing about the Bible.


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