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Finding love  [18+]
The depths of passion
by tucknits
Review of Finding love  
Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi, tucknits

This another review as part of your package from 'Marvin's Birthday Auction'.

I really liked this poem. The lines:

And you provide with one touch,
Infinite magical moments.


brought me lovely memories of my late husband. One touch was all it took. I have never experienced anything like what we had together and know I am unlikely to ever have that kind of love twice in one lifetime.

This poem flowed wonderfully and was just really well written, I am so glad I took the time to read it.

I have no suggestions for improvement.

Thank you for sharing this with the community,

Karen
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 08/02/2018 @ 11:29pm EDT
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