Hello!

I found this through the "Read and Review" button on the site, and thought that it was pretty interesting.

I liked that you included the drop note at the bottom that had the contest prompt, it was a really good insight into the rules for people who were unfamiliar with it. Color coding the prompt words was also a really nice formatting touch.

As for the content of the poem itself, I thought it was pretty good. It didn't really read like the poetry that I'm familiar with, but I thought it did a really good job exemplifying the animalistic traits mentioned in the guidelines.

It was also nice how the statement in your opening line was summarized so concisely in the final line, tying the whole piece together and really getting your message across. It added some symmetry and contributed nicely to the reading experience as a whole.

I don't have any suggestions for you for this piece, but I hope it did well in the contest! I wish you the best of luck with this, and any other writing endeavors.

Sincerely,



-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .