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 | Bureaucrap  [GC] A man working at a call centre gets bypassed for a promotion.  |
| (4.0)| Hello , I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.  First of all,  WELCOME  to WDC If you enjoy writing and reading, you have landed on the right planet...    Why I chose this item: This is a part of Angel Review Challenge for August. I needed to review something from your port and came across this one. Being a working lady the tagline woke my interest.  My favorites parts: I liked the way you have portrayed the characters. There was a lot of showing and less telling which is a very good thing.  Characters: Both the characters of Ron and Ben were well developed through their actions. They were distinguishable and I could relate to them both.  StoryLine/Plot :The story took a slow start, climbed and hit the climax with good share of suspense.  Action/Flow : The flow was smooth. There was no hiccups as the scenes changed from one to the next. Thanks to the spacing.  Ending: The ending was great. It made me laugh and Ron deserved it.  Overall impression: Overall I liked the piece. Keep adding more to your port.  A few Typos:I shook his head and : shook his hand becoming a traYou are : confusing!!!! Well Done and keep writing!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 08/10/2018 @ 10:19am EDT