First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a good poem. I feel the sadness woven in your beautiful imaginary. I understand it wrote from personal life experiences and emotions and it look great. You did a good job to put down your feelings in to words. I think that sometimes writing could calm the mind.
SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake. Happy writing!!
Mina
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