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Audrey Hepburn Facts And Her Life  [E]
Some facts about Audrey Hepburn and her life story.
by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
Review by Cat Voleur
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello!

I found this through the 'Read and Review' button on the site and thought that I would leave you with my thoughts.

While I would have loved a little bit of insight into why you were writing this (perhaps in the form of an author's note or a quick mention in the introduction to the piece) I thought it was very interesting.

Going in, I knew who Audrey Hepburn was, but I didn't really know a lot about her and now I feel like I know a lot of interesting tidbits that I never would have guessed previously.

I also really liked how visual the item was, with the inclusion of the MB art at the top and the pictures of Audrey Hepburn at the bottom. I would have loved to see them annotated, and maybe some sources listed for further reading if anyone was interested - which I would have been after you engaged my interest with this lovely piece.

All in all this was very well put together and a great way to remember a beloved icon. I wish she was still alive too, and I also wish you all the best with your writing.

Sincerely,



-Cat


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