Hello!

I found this through the 'Read and Review' function of the site.

I thought it was really interesting what you were able to accomplish in such a short amount of time. Hundred word horror is something that never ceased to impress me, and I know how difficult it can be. For only 100 words you set up a scary premise, established a character voice, and there was a neat little twist at the end to really seal the deal and make the story.

The only thing that I wasn't sure about was the use of OMG as your expletive, but I know that you were tight for words.

I really hope that it did/does well in the contest you submitted it for.

I'd also be very interested to see some of your other work, and I hope that I get the chance to read more of it some time in the near future!

Sincerely,




-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .