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 We That Were Friends  [E]
Mel is a divorced woman returning to Scotland after years away, who meets an old friend.
by 1974janeen
Review by Cat Voleur
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


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Hello!

I found this in the 'Read and Review' section and thought that I would leave you with my thoughts on it.

This was a really interesting story, and I loved where it left off. That little bit of ambiguity goes a long way, and overall I thought it was a very mature ending to an entertaining story.

One thing that I would suggest taking the time to do would be to add either indents to the beginning of your paragraphs or line breaks in between them. Little formatting details like that can make a piece a lot easier to read, and get feedback on.

As far as content went though, I thought the story was great.

I wish you all the best with it and any upcoming works.

Sincerely,




-Cat


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