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 Complaining - Nicely  [E]
I had nothing to occupy the time, so I read the back of the laundry soap box.
by Kenzie
Review by Emily
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kenzie ! I'm here in your port today to take a look at your article, "Complaining - Nicely" to celebrate your 17th Account Anniversary Month!! *Shock2* Wow! You're almost as old as WDC! *Bigsmile* I hope you are enjoying the birthday festivities as well!

*StarB* I'm glad I found this item in your port! It is very well-written, and manages to tell a story about something that may otherwise be quite boring to write about. Your imagery is fantastic as well. You're able to explain your property, your ritual of laundry-doing, your success at "complaining -- nicely" to the soda company, and the conversation and prize from the laundry company as well. I enjoyed reading!

*StarG* You had several great lines in this piece, but here are some of my favorites: "I knew my spouse and child wouldn't bother me there, lest they be asked to help." and "It actually looked like a failed science experiment, or that some living creature was floating in the bottle." You're able to be humorous and tell a factual story at the same time, which is really inspirational!

*StarB* Have you had any other experiences like this? My grandfather is very similar to you in that he will not hesitate to call a company he has a complaint about, but also ones he has a compliment for! In the past, he's received a free t-shirt in the mail, and a free signed golf ball! *Laugh* I need to follow your lead, I think!

*StarG* I hope your anniversary month is fantastic! Take care and have a great birthday week on WDC!

-Emily

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