Wow! This is an awesome collection of verses and as it would be hard to comment on them all, this will be a more general review.
I enjoyed reading your variety of poems, some free verse and some rhyme, some sad, others uplifting. The tone was evocative and your voice rang authenically! I liked the combination of themes where you wane philopsophic, idealistic and where you follow your mind as it weaves through discovery, joy and pain. Even the last one ends on a hopeful note.

The first deep poem engaged me and drew me to read on! Well done!

You could take a couple of the longer ones and put them into their own items...for reviewers. Yet I know space in basic membership is limited. Keep writing and get reviewing!

Thank you for sharing your heartfelt creations. It is so cool to write the feelings and thoughts of the day..like working out what ever needs to be released. I appreciate the vision.

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