I was drawn to the title as it had a question mark and made me curious and prompted me to engage in the question myself. I really felt the vibe here and thought that it does sometimes happen that when we compare to others, we come up short!

I liked the short free style, that suit the content of a reflective nature. Addressing the notion of how to be happy when someone else is..especially if one is the one left behind in a break up, is a relevant theme.

IT was easy to follow the message and punctuation asssited the read. The only confusing part were the first words in the first two lines. I wanted to change 'Is" to "It's" for proper grammar.

Evocative ending as I could hear the sigh!

Thanks for sharing your little thought and getting your flair out here in WDC!
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