Good morning! Just thought I would come by for a visit and I found your poem: "Invalid Item"  and I just had to come on in and as I did I found a very clever, unique, charming, one of a kind and very creative poem. I like the flow and the way it makes me feel. You really do have a way with words and you weave your web of words drawling me in and leaving me wanting more. I did not see any errors at all, great job! I could not possibly pick a favorite line because it all goes so beautifully together. Keep writing and sharing.
I am giving this poem a rating of five stars.



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