Good morning! I stumbled into your port and found this piece "Invalid Item"  And I was curious by the title and the description and so I came on in and found a really very creative, unique, little story here. You really do have a way with words as you bring your story to life and I have to admit the last line of this story did make me laugh. Come on I'll take you to Walmart. and you sighed. That to me was funny so thank you for the laugh. You are very creative and like I said you have a way with words you drew me in and left me wanting more! Keep writing and keep sharing.
I did not see any errors, great job. Congratulations on winning in the contest too. I am giving this short story a five-star rating.



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