I was drawn to the title and its luring message. I thought of taking time away from it all! Your poem gives wise advice on the best way to live that makes sense. My favourite is listen to learn, count the stars, and of course, smiled at the "papers and pens", so vital for a writer. LOL I like the second verse especially in terms of advice for teens!

The quatrains are well composed with effective rhyme and flow. It was fun to read. I noticed that the first verse lines are not all consistent 8 syllable counts as in the rest of the verses.

The repeated sections in each verse added to the speed of flow and gave the piece the feel of a wisdom reflection.

Thanks for sharing your vision and experience in this inspirational verse.

You responded to this review 09/04/2018 @ 1:55pm EDT

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