Hello Golden Eagle Eye



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I love reading poetry about nature. And this one is good, it host Spring and Autumn. Great imagery of the colors of the seasons.

The title is a good fit for this piece. It give perspective and help sets the tone of the poem. This piece offers beauty within each stanza. There is a good rhythm and flow. I like the first stanza the best, it's setting up the story.

It follows the form closely. Stanza five doesn't have the first word rhyming, Four and Draw.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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