Hello Dominique



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

An interesting poem. It follows the form perfectly and has a great message. I feel each line flows nicely into the next line. The imagery is good, I feel you have described WDC quiet well.

The title works well with the poem and it sets the tone for this piece as well as setting perspective. I like the different colors used for the beginning word of each line, very creative.

I have no suggestions to offer, this poem is well written.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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