I had a bit of a problem with the rhythm. I'm reading through it again. Counting syllables and all. Just trying to figure it out. Is the 2nd verse supposed to be the same flow as the first?

The third line in both the first and second verses do not have the same amount of syllables. Same with the 4th lines.
I'm not trying to be picky but it does throw me out of the poem when it doesn't flow quite right.

You do rhyme well and consistently. You use descriptive words well and I got a great mental image, if a Qwirn is a dragon. lol

Okay, it was lovely, but I guess I was too dense to figure out what a Qwirn is. lol Are they dragons as you name them at the bottom?

Thanks so much for sharing and I love dragons.

Love, LinnAnn