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Yellow and Blue Makes Green  [ASR]
Two becoming one, in mind, body, spirit. An excellent marriage, designed by our Creator.
by Kenzie
Review by Past Member 'afinger83'
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Kenzie,

*ConfettiB* Happy Account Anniversary! *ConfettiO*

My Thoughts: This is a beautifully written prose and it really got me thinking. I love how you did a comparison with a canvas (yellow and blue paint) with and a relationship. I agree that sometimes they should blend together becoming one (green) because when two love each other there should not be a line where everything is separated. It's all about 'give and take' and bonds that cannot be broken.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is when you mentioned how once the color is green it cannot be changed back, but instead remains green like when two become one those feelings remain.

Suggestions: I wouldn't change a thing, this prose is on-point. *ElecGuitar*



Sincerely,
MoonFae *Moon*
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