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Given: Sep 9, 2018 at 1:32am
Length: 850 Characters |
755 w/o WritingML
Hello Kenzie,
Happy Account Anniversary!
My Thoughts: This is a beautifully written prose and it really got me thinking. I love how you did a comparison with a canvas (yellow and blue paint) with and a relationship. I agree that sometimes they should blend together becoming one (green) because when two love each other there should not be a line where everything is separated. It's all about 'give and take' and bonds that cannot be broken.
My Favorite Part: My favorite part is when you mentioned how once the color is green it cannot be changed back, but instead remains green like when two become one those feelings remain.
Suggestions: I wouldn't change a thing, this prose is on-point.
Sincerely,
MoonFae
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