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Review #4438021
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Bluetooth Blues  [13+]
Christopher gets help with love. (Co-authored with Max Griffin.)
by 🇺🇸 Carol St.Ann 🇺🇸
Review of Bluetooth Blues  
Review by Past Member 'afinger83'
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Greetings Carol,

I wanted to stop by and review something you wrote, but I also wanted to wish you a Happy 12th Account Anniversary!*Cake*

*Music1* My Thoughts: I love your story here, it was very cute and I like how Lydia ended up trying to get Christopher's attention after giving up on the Bluetooth. Roxanne wasn't good for him, she was too uppity or flighty, I can't decide which. I thought this whole story was just wonderful and the added bonus of the music made it all come together. I am so glad I read this, what a treat!

*Music2* My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when Christopher and Lydia broke out in tune.

*PenB* Suggestions: I didn't see any sentences in need of repairs.

Sincerely,
MoonFae *Moon*

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