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Given: Sep 9, 2018 at 4:28am
Length: 847 Characters |
732 w/o WritingML
Greetings Carol,
I wanted to stop by and review something you wrote, but I also wanted to wish you a Happy 12th Account Anniversary!
My Thoughts: I love your story here, it was very cute and I like how Lydia ended up trying to get Christopher's attention after giving up on the Bluetooth. Roxanne wasn't good for him, she was too uppity or flighty, I can't decide which. I thought this whole story was just wonderful and the added bonus of the music made it all come together. I am so glad I read this, what a treat!
My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when Christopher and Lydia broke out in tune.
Suggestions: I didn't see any sentences in need of repairs.
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